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they say we'll never be


Author: gloomyanddoomy
ASL Info:    17,female
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Words: 188
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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they say we'll never be



Your fear it moves me.
Your weakness I taste.
I breathe you,
I hate you.
You course through my veins.

You want me. You love me.
And I hate myself.
I need you,
but I hate you.
'Cause I want nothing else.

Your pain escapes through me.
'Cause I breathe you,
but I hate you.
'Cause they say
we could never be.
They can't see.

I know I shouldn't love you.
There's just too much to fake.
But you see me,
and I feel you.
And I am not afraid.

And I bleed you since
I've healed you.
Your pain escapes
through me.
'Cause I breathe you,
but I hate you.
'Cause they say
we could never be.

It seems the pain's
been traded,
Since I pulled you through.
And now my mind's
been so jaded.
And I would kill
myself for you.
I'd die for you.




Submitted on 2007-01-05 14:44:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  cool i like it keep up the good writtings, ty
| Posted on 2007-01-05 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]


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