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Cancer Kills Quickly, A Warning to the Sickly


Author: poetic_tragedy
ASL Info:    16/f/USA
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I wrote this about cancer because I absolutely hate this sickness. My best friends mom died from it, she was practically a mom to me, and I thought that I could honor her and write a poem about just how horrible cancer is.


Cancer Kills Quickly, A Warning to the Sickly



I've been killing myself slowly
Beginning to rot away
Still they look at me coldly
My skin now dead and gray.

I've picked out a coffin
Even picked out my plot
I think of my death often
Think of the time I've still got.

As I begin to slip away
My eyes closed and teeth clenched
I'm wishing for another day
Wishing for my thirst to be quenched.

Look at me now, six feet underground
I'm feeling the cold and decay
While I lie here, the world still spins round
I didn't want to die this way!

I hated this sickness
Now it's done me in
I hated it's quickness
I could never win.

As I laid there in my hospital bed
Waiting for my time to come
They unhooked my machines, knowing I'd soon be dead
They said it was ok, but I'm not that dumb.

The obviously lied
They couldn't face the truth
The truth is that I died
Cancer destroyed my youth.




Submitted on 2007-01-05 15:09:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i love you britnyyyyy
your poem made me cry
;_; thank you so much
i've been wanting to write about that stupid [censored] thing for a long time but i didn't know how to put it into words and you did it perfectly
ily!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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| Posted on 2007-01-05 00:00:00 | by xcut_up_angelx | [ Reply to This ]
  holy moly thats so deep for me to read i hope you have good days here on earth always a friend ty
| Posted on 2007-01-05 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]


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