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    dots Submission Name: Cancer Kills Quickly, A Warning to the Sicklydots
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    Author: poetic_tragedy
    ASL Info:    16/f/USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.89 - 39/55/30
    Words: 171
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    Description:
       I wrote this about cancer because I absolutely hate this sickness. My best friends mom died from it, she was practically a mom to me, and I thought that I could honor her and write a poem about just how horrible cancer is.


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    dotsCancer Kills Quickly, A Warning to the Sicklydots
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    I've been killing myself slowly
    Beginning to rot away
    Still they look at me coldly
    My skin now dead and gray.

    I've picked out a coffin
    Even picked out my plot
    I think of my death often
    Think of the time I've still got.

    As I begin to slip away
    My eyes closed and teeth clenched
    I'm wishing for another day
    Wishing for my thirst to be quenched.

    Look at me now, six feet underground
    I'm feeling the cold and decay
    While I lie here, the world still spins round
    I didn't want to die this way!

    I hated this sickness
    Now it's done me in
    I hated it's quickness
    I could never win.

    As I laid there in my hospital bed
    Waiting for my time to come
    They unhooked my machines, knowing I'd soon be dead
    They said it was ok, but I'm not that dumb.

    The obviously lied
    They couldn't face the truth
    The truth is that I died
    Cancer destroyed my youth.




    Submitted on 2007-01-05 15:09:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i love you britnyyyyy
    your poem made me cry
    ;_; thank you so much
    i've been wanting to write about that stupid [censored] thing for a long time but i didn't know how to put it into words and you did it perfectly
    ily!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    <3333333
    | Posted on 2007-01-05 00:00:00 | by xcut_up_angelx | [ Reply to This ]
      holy moly thats so deep for me to read i hope you have good days here on earth always a friend ty
    | Posted on 2007-01-05 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]


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