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Hidden yearning for a Page

Author: LadyMerlina
ASL Info:    24/ F/ Montreal
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Words: 103
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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If you like it, you do.
If you don't, you don't.

I just went with it.

Hidden yearning for a Page

I stand by
and watch him grow.
Unscathed in the shadows.
Finding safer arms
So I can live on.

I've held my secret.
Held it still.
Close to my heart.

But at arm's lenght from me.

Inside my coat pocket,
it becomes mine and silent.
Then, my silence becomes him
And I caress it.

My hidden yearning for this Page
becomes painfully palpable.

While I wait noiseless and sage
I put on a brave face
and join the parade.

Always stroking my secret
and keeping him close.

I live on and no one knows.

Submitted on 2007-01-06 15:23:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  It was interesting. What I really liked is how time passes. And I totally understand what you're saying. Ive got the same secret, but sometimes you need to expose it. Hasn't yet worked out for me, but it might for you. I really liked the 4th verse. Great metaphor!
| Posted on 2007-01-06 00:00:00 | by TheStillSilence | [ Reply to This ]

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