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    dots Submission Name: Peaceful threat of happinessdots
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    Author: LadyMerlina
    ASL Info:    24/ F/ Montreal
    Elite Ratio:    3.07 - 60/93/58
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsPeaceful threat of happinessdots
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    Silence.
    At the end of a thread.
    Fallen fingers, stopped hands
    Like a yearning unfulfilled.
    Like a hunger unfed.

    I think of you

    And time fades on,
    fades fast
    and fades away.

    Still,
    THIS PEACEFUL THREAT OF HAPPINESS
    HANGS ABOVE ME AND WILL NOT BE SWAYED.

    I think of you

    I know I always want most
    what I can't have.
    BUT I REFUSE TO THORW AWAY HAPPINESS WITH BOTH HANDS.

    I think of you.

    So, I love another man.




    Submitted on 2007-01-06 15:54:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      What??????

    Such a dedication and then a betrayal of what you would silently declare you love for? Sheez, I'm broken!

    It hurts you in some small part to love a love that knows not of your love or loves you not. But it hurts even more to know that you betrayed such a purity held for "a love" by loving another.

    "The demons of one life pass to another if not confronted and conquered" - Is love a demon[?]

    Not too sure if the capitalised lines make for any more impetus of impact. I think not having reformatted them in my mind. I think if you could tighten it up the solidity of the piece would be better for it.

    A nice expressive piece.
    | Posted on 2007-01-13 00:00:00 | by danativ | [ Reply to This ]


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