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    dots Submission Name: I'm Always Heredots
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    Author: Keaton Volkov
    ASL Info:    18/M/Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    4.73 - 22/17/13
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 730
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    Description:
       I wrote this poem for my best friend, who suffers from ADD. He's annoying, he gets on people's nerves, and most everyone judges him before they get to know him. He's always happy, and he's one of the greatest comedians I know. This isn't one of my best poems, but he went through a rough day of getting picked on, so I wrote it as a little pick-me-up for him.


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    dotsI'm Always Heredots
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    Take pride, my young friend,
    And know you are unique.
    Donít believe a single word
    When they say you are a geek.

    I know life has got you down,
    But I never seem to see you frown.
    Always perpetually happy,
    Just like your foster pappy.

    I know your weaknesses,
    I know your strengths.
    And I love how you always go great lengths
    To make all those sad people smile.

    So donít give up,
    Iím here for you
    No matter what you may do.
    So take comfort in knowing
    That my pride is always showing
    Because I know you.
    The happiest man to walk this earth.




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    ||| Comments |||
      That is so kind. And thoughtful.

    I guess I don't really have a critique of the poem. But I thought the first two things were important enough to post for.
    | Posted on 2008-01-25 00:00:00 | by Morsketch | [ Reply to This ]
      This is such a profound poem. Dedicated and written in love and respect... for someone else's courage and persistence.

    You've created something beautiful and special and I honour you for your insight and desire to make someone else feel 'looked after'.

    Very well written.
    | Posted on 2008-01-16 00:00:00 | by Beulah | [ Reply to This ]
      I like it. and um... I dont know wether to be freaked out or to say Thank You about the STALK. o_o
    | Posted on 2007-01-07 00:00:00 | by BrokenAngelKat | [ Reply to This ]


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