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    dots Submission Name: Shadowsdots

    Author: TheBlackFairy
    ASL Info:    18/female/Caldwell
    Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 32/29/15
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       I wrote this while watching superman returns. Wich might be why it sorta confuses me. o well

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    Do not cover me in your shadows,
    For their darkness slowly seeps into the mind
    And wreaks havoc upon the soul.
    Yet do not mistake my worry of destruction for fear.
    For every night I sit and listen intently to the haunting lullabies
    The hidden shadows sing.
    But still, Do not cover me in shadows.

    Do not cover me with your shadows.
    For I have just finally escaped my own.
    I ran towards the light of hope,
    And with each hurried step I made
    My shadows grew longer.
    Yet when I finally reached the golden light,
    And it shown upon the fear all shadows hold,
    No sound did they make.
    My shadows faded into the surrounding darkness
    And began their wait for me,
    I escaped my shadows,
    So please, do not cover me in yours

    Submitted on 2007-01-06 23:06:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Oooo.... it's unique, it paints the perfect images on the mind. It's a demanding poem, it requires thought and I find that I enjoy it. Brava, it's good.

    | Posted on 2007-01-25 00:00:00 | by Acid | [ Reply to This ]

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