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    dots Submission Name: Corner for the Cowarddots
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    Author: precious_poetry
    ASL Info:    19 F TN
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 137/145/67
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsCorner for the Cowarddots
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    Unmoving, unchanging,
    The world still spins.
    Hatred ever raging,
    And sorrow always wins.

    Life goes on without me,
    I sit here, frozen, and frightened,
    What is it I will be?
    Will I ever be enlightened?

    This corner, my hiding place,
    Shadows hide the tears,
    Can't see the frown on my face,
    I've been stuck here for years.

    Too afraid to move,
    Cowardly and ashamed.
    I have nothing to lose,
    Can't find a thing to gain.

    In my corner, crouched, alone,
    Always wondering what I've missed.
    Losing time, minutes, days, forever gone,
    And I do naught but exist...




    Submitted on 2007-01-07 00:14:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow i had to add this to my favorites because it just really brought out alot of emotion. i really liked it i can relate i find it intreaging because its yet another thing that i can't write about, anyway i really liked it great write -jess-
    | Posted on 2007-01-07 00:00:00 | by gothicgirl | [ Reply to This ]


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