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    dots Submission Name: Yes, Lets!dots
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    Author: dark-red-pain
    ASL Info:    18/F/Strayla
    Elite Ratio:    3.96 - 447/432/65
    Words: 45
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       Should we?


    although we know that in falling in love we leave ourselves open and vulnerable to hurt we do it anyway because the feeling as it lasts is the best in the world and then, more often than not, we get hurt.
    so basically- love is tricky.


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    dotsYes, Lets!dots
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    Forecast is stormy
    But you were never one to see
    The warning signs,
    Safety.
    Because it feels nice
    To be.
    Dreaming.
    On top of the world
    Until it falls on you.
    Falling. Fading. Flat.
    Itís a tricky one-
    This weather worn drug.
    Love.




    Submitted on 2007-01-07 01:15:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Oh so true. I haven't heard from you for a while but sounds like your life is pretty interesting at this moment. I don't completely grasp the meaning of it in which it is either a(n):

    A) will you love me poem
    B) will you f**k me poem
    C) or an I'll love you forever poem.

    So yeah, that's the problem I see here on my part.

    Great write though I have to say. I haven't done anything with poetry in about a month now and I'm glad I started reading them with this write. Thanks

    - Kyle
    | Posted on 2007-01-09 00:00:00 | by Namlooc20 | [ Reply to This ]


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