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    dots Submission Name: A great big spacedots
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    Author: Jeniffer
    ASL Info:    18/f/earth
    Elite Ratio:    5.76 - 240/279/81
    Words: 2062
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1141
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 14106



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       Really dumb. Not my best write....I say it's worthless....a big nothing.....


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    Submitted on 2007-01-07 20:03:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      There was something soothing, cleansing, refreshing, inspiring about staring at a blank space in anticipation of
    something. That is some cutting edge stuff :)

    Nicely
    | Posted on 2007-10-10 00:00:00 | by nicelyJ | [ Reply to This ]
      wow! simply amazing! brilliant! touching AND moving! the suspense had me hanging on the edge of my seat. my favorite part was the quiet. the silence was breathtaking, majestic, like the view from atop creation. quiet and still, yet if you listen close enough you can almost hear the voice of God, or maybe it was only the neighbors yelling at their kids. either way it stirred something deep in my soul and left me longing for more.
    quite possibly the best thing I've read in weeks.
    keep on keeping on.
    Milo
    | Posted on 2007-01-10 00:00:00 | by Milo shanley | [ Reply to This ]


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