wow! simply amazing! brilliant! touching AND moving! the suspense had me hanging on the edge of my seat. my favorite part was the quiet. the silence was breathtaking, majestic, like the view from atop creation. quiet and still, yet if you listen close enough you can almost hear the voice of God, or maybe it was only the neighbors yelling at their kids. either way it stirred something deep in my soul and left me longing for more.
quite possibly the best thing I've read in weeks.
keep on keeping on.