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    dots Submission Name: Why Do you Keep me Around?dots
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    Author: Martha McEntire
    ASL Info:    34/f/Indiana
    Elite Ratio:    2.63 - 27/25/22
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
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    dotsWhy Do you Keep me Around?dots
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    Why do you keep me around?
    You play with my emotions
    like I am some kind of instrument.
    I know we are friends,
    but you know I want to be so much more.
    One day you seem to be on the same
    chapter as I am.
    Then the next you just flip the page.
    I don't know how much more I can
    take of this.
    I'm not just some little puppy you can
    string along.
    I am a woman and I can move on.
    So maybe you should decide.
    Maybe you should realize.
    Why you keep me around!




    Submitted on 2007-01-08 10:32:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      A lover's lament as old as time itself! Too many of us are aware of the emotions expressed here so ably ... bravo ... bravo ... bravo ... Michael
    | Posted on 2007-01-09 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]


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