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    dots Submission Name: Cloudy Daydots

    Author: Sheli Bee
    ASL Info:    27/F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.02 - 10/8/7
    Words: 170
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
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       hmmm...maybe a lil odd-maybe me to then.

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    dotsCloudy Daydots

    Cloud shadows
    Dance across the lawn
    And it makes me smile
    I'm not shallow
    But it has been long
    Yeah it's been a while

    Since I've seen the sunlight
    And felt I had something to look forward to
    I've learned wrong from right
    And it's amazing there's still me and you

    Cloud shadows
    Give no justice (as I)
    Gaze up and see bright blue
    I'm not shallow
    I barely brush this (but I)
    Can't handle my life without you

    Clouds shadows on a hill changing
    Rapidly changing then spreading to blend
    I've been doin' some rearranging
    Of which before I coudn't comprehend

    (All these)Cloud shadows
    Make my heart smile
    With a warmth that you also bring
    I once was shallow
    Just for a while
    Since then I've had many'a sting

    Sorry I don't draw a good picture although
    Maybe it just might warm up
    I got a good camera and a really good eye
    I just might go snap some up

    Submitted on 2007-01-08 11:10:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I think it very well done ... clouds are like flowers or love in poetry ... the just plain lend themselves so well to verse almost no matter how you use them ... fine ...bravo ... barvo ... Michael
    | Posted on 2007-01-09 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]

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