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    dots Submission Name: Lustdots
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    Author: Scribner
    Elite Ratio:    2.3 - 131/134/18
    Words: 23
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsLustdots
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    Lust,
    like a fun-house mirror,
    distorts reality.
    Allowing us to see someone,
    not as they are,
    but how we want them to be.




    Submitted on 2004-01-30 17:42:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Finally, someone who understands the difference. Short, to the point, and smart. Good write.

    Soph
    | Posted on 2006-04-28 00:00:00 | by Soph | [ Reply to This ]
      this shows the truth on the impurity of a relationship and how we think that everything really should be.
    | Posted on 2004-02-29 00:00:00 | by silentpoison | [ Reply to This ]
      Lovely little raindrop of a poem, sweet and clear. And true. Honestly, I feel silly responding to your poems because there's hardly anything new to say. Godd job, good job, good job. Like the imagery of fun-house mirrors.
    | Posted on 2004-02-23 00:00:00 | by Niphredil | [ Reply to This ]
      I love this one. So true and artfully brief.
    | Posted on 2004-01-31 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]
      awesome short and sweet lol and it's all very very true
    | Posted on 2004-01-31 00:00:00 | by Soulraven | [ Reply to This ]


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