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    dots Submission Name: HerAndMedots
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    Author: Mykquillion
    ASL Info:    20/M/NEB
    Elite Ratio:    4.25 - 109/124/41
    Words: 48
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
    Total Views: 854
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    Bytes: 354



    Description:
       Relationships are the binding of two entities, and it is a necessity to know if it is a good or bad joining.


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    dotsHerAndMedots
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    Iíve never cared
    So much
    Iíve never dared
    So much

    But it is not love.

    Lust binds us together;
    Physically.
    Emptiness binds us together;
    Emotionally.
    Depression binds us together;
    Fearfully.
    Drugs bind us together;
    And that will last forever.




    Submitted on 2007-01-08 14:55:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I hurt for your after reading this. Drugs don't have to last forever, and neither does this chick if you don't click. being together is about more than emptiness and lust. Keep looking, you'll find her.
    | Posted on 2007-01-25 00:00:00 | by orange | [ Reply to This ]
      This is the perfect description of my life. I like how you seperated the last few lines into single words. The meaning is so...clear. keep up the good work
    | Posted on 2007-01-08 00:00:00 | by I_m not Broken | [ Reply to This ]


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