You are never satisfied.

Author: TeeTee ASL Info:    15/f/georgia Elite Ratio:    1.31 - 30 /32 /22 Words: 130

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You are never satisfied.

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No matter how hard I try, You are never satisfied, This is not my home, I rather be alone. You complain about the way things are, When you know that I try so hard, What do you expect from me, Im just being a teen. No matter how hard I try, You are never satisfied, This is not my home, I rather be alone. I know I have fucked up But doesnt mean that you should give up. The times when we argue Just makes the situation get better every time, Thats why I say that I am too strong to cry. No matter how hard I try, You are never satisfied, This is not my home, I rather be alone.

Submitted on 2007-01-08 21:19:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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People never seem to respect or appreciate what we do... but sometimes we have to step back and realize that maybe we don't appreciate other people just as much, or more than they don't appreciate us. If we do everything just to recieve appreciation and credit from other people not much would get accomplished. Good write, keep up the good work. - Kathleen

| Posted on 2007-01-12 00:00:00 | by kathleenbrennan | [ Reply to This ]

nothing pleases the people....

| Posted on 2007-01-09 00:00:00 | by WD-40 | [ Reply to This ]

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