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    dots Submission Name: Whydots
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    Author: Cokesu
    Elite Ratio:    2.46 - 18/22/22
    Words: 153
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
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    dotsWhydots
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    Why do people look at me?
    What do they see?
    A monster from under the sea.

    Just because I am different.
    Just because I am strange.
    O please tell me what do the see.

    Am I so different?
    Am I so strange?
    That no one wants to know me.

    O why O why tell me do people hate me.

    I know I am different.
    I know I am strange.
    But that just that there is more then that.

    I am so different.
    I am so strange.
    That I am cast away from everyone else.

    O why canít anyone help a strange person.
    No one else.


    Most kids can read.
    Most kids can write.
    But I canít even do that.

    But why am I so different?
    But why am I so strange?
    Canít anyone help me in this day and age?




    Submitted on 2007-01-09 08:01:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I liked this ..... so raw and emotional - you threw your heart into it and spoke honestly about yourself. I liked the structure which you kept throughout and that helped to make for an easier read.
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    | Posted on 2007-01-09 00:00:00 | by hammyj | [ Reply to This ]


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