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    dots Submission Name: Gived That was given back.dots
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    Author: Cokesu
    Elite Ratio:    2.46 - 18/22/22
    Words: 36
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsGived That was given back.dots
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    I give you my heart it�s yours to keep.
    From now and forever more.

    Everyday I will love you even more then yesterday.

    So I give you my heart it�s yours to keep.




    Submitted on 2007-01-09 08:07:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Short but to the point, more of a statement than poetry but still heartfelt. Just a shame theres some fools out there who dont see the wonderful things in front of them and refuse to accept gifts like the one you wanted to give. Still means you can move on till you find the one who does want to take your heart :)
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    | Posted on 2007-01-09 00:00:00 | by hammyj | [ Reply to This ]


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