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    dots Submission Name: Living in the wardots
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    Author: Cokesu
    Elite Ratio:    2.46 - 18/22/22
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Poetry/Trapped
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    dotsLiving in the wardots
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    Come all I hear is the deathly silence from the war that happened just before.
    I try to smile and make some sound but that silence it defining me.

    I hide in my room were the silence wont fallow
    But still I hear it out side my door.
    But then the silence brake and the war start again
    All I want to do is cry

    I want to run were I can feel at home
    Were I am now with the silence has killed most all the home feeling away.
    I do not have a home the place I have is the silence that were I live now.




    Submitted on 2007-01-09 08:29:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      some apt poetic diction, however, many typos, but that can be easily fixed by a re-write ... fine theme ... an old one ... but an important ... bravo ...
    | Posted on 2007-01-09 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]


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