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    Author: Infected Mind
    ASL Info:    19
    Elite Ratio:    1.57 - 14/18/25
    Words: 146
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    once again... once again... i feel it coarsing through my veins, and im surprised once again i know your laughter and pure splendor of your eyes once again i can rest easy with the thoughts of you in my head once again alive no more demons... feelin dead once again once again just kiss me and lei me know that im alive i am never restless with the warmth of you beside... once again just say those words and let me collaspe in your arms i will be the sheld that trys to hinder and repel the harm once again just simply go on being simply what is you once again show me what it is that brings me close to you once again! i know that i can be sure! once again! i have somethings that pure! once again if feel i can not shyly open my heart girl its you that now just rips it apart... once again...




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