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    Author: Infected Mind
    ASL Info:    19
    Elite Ratio:    1.57 - 14/18/25
    Words: 205
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    bitches... no time... no direction,,, lost amongst themselves i was here to show some direction but you ddnt want my help now happy and torn between loing again i fear that this all just wont end i have seen your tradgedies and dont know if theres enough of me to save you too i know what you want eventually will all be the same i know that your still playing your game...! Girls i think it time to put razors away cant comlain when you know that it stems form you too... but you want more, and you need it ,and thers nothing thai i can do, for you girl ,make up your mind ,dont waste my time... at some point i must go and find mine... say you love me and my world come cane crashing down... can you be mine this time?.. am i just wating time... i need for me to get MINE! one true, simply understands you MINE1X3 care for you adore you and always be sure.... TRUEX3 rose wilts by rhe reaning glass thunder strikes you here the clash open your eyes, your heart ,to me start for me to believe again, i know i can leave a hole for me inside a place where i can rest and die remaining forever our hearts collide...




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