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    dots Submission Name: Games...dots
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    Author: Infected Mind
    ASL Info:    19
    Elite Ratio:    1.57 - 14/18/25
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsGames...dots
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    Games... build me up only to knock me down again, i am the game you play with no intent to win, move your piece and try to reach your goal, knock me down so you can get a better hold (play your game! ruin my name... the lies you say... one day you will pay) x2 your kingdoms on the balance, as im coming with my knight, how dare you set this challenge?... but i will set things right move a lil closer... i am coming for your king when its said and over... it is i only left standing




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