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    dots Submission Name: im always right heredots
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    Author: Infected Mind
    ASL Info:    19
    Elite Ratio:    1.57 - 14/18/25
    Words: 155
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsim always right heredots
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    im always right here here now... forever until eternity, free now... together you here with me, unspoken... the understanding that binds, ive fallen... for you i have lost my mind... crazy for you, a love thats undying maybe for you, i wont give up trying ive lost it all and have the scar, realize now what you are... angel that was sent to me, ease the scars and pain gently in raindrops i hear you calling my name, i was born a new i cannot be the same! i love you... and all that you do... your here in my heart, were never apart i miss you, wonder whats new? die to see your face, have one more taste... i love you... have i told you... might of been a while... you know in my smile dont ever fear... im always right here... here now... forever until eternity, free now... together you here with me, unspoken... the understanding that binds, ive fallen... for you i have lost my mind... (i love you sweetcheeks!)




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