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    Author: Infected Mind
    ASL Info:    19
    Elite Ratio:    1.57 - 14/18/25
    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Before... gone from this place i need... the only place that i can breathe, lost and im growing cold... this eternal struggle growing old, marching on aimlessly... tearing all this hate from me! to one day clearly think... and not always on the brink! this place that i cant find... euphoric image in my mind, this place thats left in time... this place thats in my mind holy image oh so pure... lost recollections of a time before, i build this fantasy... into reality! gone from this place i need... the only place that i can breathe, lost and im growing cold... this eternal struggle growing old... holy image oh so pure... lost recollections of a time before, i build this fantasy... into reality!




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