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    dots Submission Name: explode to piecesdots
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    Author: Infected Mind
    ASL Info:    19
    Elite Ratio:    1.57 - 14/18/25
    Words: 331
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Bytes: 1988



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    dotsexplode to piecesdots
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    Explode to pieces... blatently describing the deepest depths of my sanity and im hoping that my words dont get misconstrued in vanity im just looking for somewhere to die...somewhere that i can hang my head and cry, solitary mind, abstract and in depth looking for shreds of my life that i have left, that why i walk and stumble not knowing why i am the directionless, no course, nothing!fuck no, not i! raging splinters of something i thought was true and not knowing how to get it thru to you its on my mind, most all the time, why do we all take... all this hurt and ache, lose our minds, most all the time but why cant we see! be the best we can be! its on my mind, most all the time... but we go on... still doing wrong we lose our minds most all the time so caught up in this, emotional drama bullshit! its on my mind most all the time dont they get it, need to forget it, finally start living! we lose our minds most all the time i guess we should all show a lil more compassion and be a lil more forgiving cause i keep this anger brewin inside nice and hot when it goes... its time for double barrel buck shot not for you but upon my face waiting screaming inside craving for the taste, i just dont care anymore fuck you all, i aint never coming back and a single tear falls... EXPLODE TO PIECES! i feel like i am breathing its on my mind, most all the time, why do we all take... all this hurt and ache, lose our minds, most all the time but why cant we see! be the best we can be! its on my mind, most all the time... but we go on... still doing wrong we lose our minds most all the time so caught up in this, emotional drama bullshit! its on my mind most all the time dont they get it, need to forget it, finally start living! we lose our minds most all the time i guess we should all show a lil more compassion and be a lil more forgiving




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