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    dots Submission Name: cloud ninety ninedots
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    Author: Infected Mind
    ASL Info:    19
    Elite Ratio:    1.57 - 14/18/25
    Words: 122
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    cloud ninety nine drifting by and i cant see why, i care at all i even try, here i am open wide take a look to see inside scattered thoughts fill my mind but im doin fine just drifting by on cloud ninety nine its not as bright, airs not as sweet doesnt get me down it wont defeat i just keep comin on ridin dark til dawn, im gonna keep gettin by, and doin fine as i watch myself and take my time riding by on cloud ninety nine not quite heaven but better than most floating onward holy ghost i retract at sight of flame go back forth from which you came grey skies , stormin all the time but im alright doin just fine trapped here ever floating by doin my time on cloud ninety nine




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