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    dots Submission Name: Lord of the flies...(my myspace name)dots
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    Author: Infected Mind
    ASL Info:    19
    Elite Ratio:    1.57 - 14/18/25
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsLord of the flies...(my myspace name)dots
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    lord of the flies... i sit here all alone, in what i call my home, diseased and plagued with pests, im king among insects, i give and i take away, thats why... with me they stay... LORD OF TH FLIES! feel the wrath, LOOK INTO THRSE EYES! im the...LORD OF THE FLIES! by my hand.... some will live, and some will DIE! FUCKIN LORD OF THE FLIES! LORD OF THE FLIES! X4 im am waiting, sitting here watching... concentatrating analyzing, im hiding, this time just biding im stalking, im walking, so now its no more talking (GO IN FOR THE KILL! CUT THEIR THROAT! and let it spill..}x2 LEAVE EM FUCKIN STIFF AND STILL! you fuckin goddamn right i will... NEVER GET IN MY FUCKIN WAY!...i will attack im not afraid... no interest in what you have you say, DO AS I SAY YOU WILL OBEY! LORD OF THE FLIES! FUCKIN! IM THE LORD OF THE FLIES! x4




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