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    dots Submission Name: you only hear medots
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    Author: Infected Mind
    ASL Info:    19
    Elite Ratio:    1.57 - 14/18/25
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    you only listen... what more now can i say, i wasnt prepared, in any way this ghost remains here haunting me right in my face fucking taunting me i scream out but the words bounce back i cant believe that you made me do that! dont listen to a single word i say you only hear me when i walk away this anger, ive felt consumes me, try to vent but you misconstrue me the answers hiding waiting for me to find i cannot take it, I WONT DO IT THIS TIME! my head is full of all the shit you say your the reason that my world turned grey i scream but still no one hears me you only hear me when i walk away




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