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    dots Submission Name: Descentdots
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    Author: Infected Mind
    ASL Info:    19
    Elite Ratio:    1.57 - 14/18/25
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Descent constant rumours, lies are forming surrounding me, insults swarming it was you... screaming at me screaming louder when i turned deafly spread your hatred, into minds infect something else you just dont get, take your hatred, focused on me, tell your lies, im still happy, unaffected i know the truth, unsuccessful it was no use, ive built my tower, built on virtue, ive come too far, too far to hurt you, fuck your reasons, cold indescisions, fuck your treasons, bold insiscions, do unto others as they have done, i gave no reasons, i gave you none, beligerance and all your greed, is all you have and all you need, keep throwing stones on the innocent, have fun on the way as you descent.




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