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    Author: Infected Mind
    ASL Info:    19
    Elite Ratio:    1.57 - 14/18/25
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Almost There... my secret place with a familiar face, where the bodies pile high so i can take my taste, once arrived, you must stay inside, become part of this game i hide, see your eyes, now you've realized, what this is all about! there is no way out! deaf ear to the way you scream and shout! GOODBYE! God it feels so right, when i let my knife drag across your skin and start to open, reveal to me what you leave concealed, a secret as each flake is peeled, but when the blood runs out then so does my fun, and i creep to the surface for another one, to increase the pile, disease me with a smile, dont worry none, ill be there in a little while....




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      Sorry I didn't get your reply
    I change my account
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    'TwistedMinded'
    | Posted on 2007-01-10 00:00:00 | by TwistedMinded | [ Reply to This ]
      Beautiful
    I feel you
    check out my poem
    called "betrayed"
    you might relate to it
    | Posted on 2007-01-10 00:00:00 | by Sambentley | [ Reply to This ]


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