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    dots Submission Name: blue...dots

    Author: Infected Mind
    ASL Info:    19
    Elite Ratio:    1.57 - 14/18/25
    Words: 161
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    blue Current mood: blah a million different whispers that are spinning in my head reminding me how much it hurts and what i should have done instead i will not see the shadows while the lumenescence fades so many dangers i must know so many i must face something has stopped the balance thrown it all a different skew you have stolen all my colors but you have left me blue in a world of your creation i am a puppet by your strings my whole lifes in devastation and still, i remain nothing i know you hear these words when i speak them out loud i never fucking know how to deal with you now i just did unto as was to me i did unto to set myself free, I HAD TO MAKE IT RIGHT! FOR EVERY TIME IT WAS WRONG! I HAVE SEEN IT ALL BEFORE, I KNEW ALL ALONG! I SEE ALL YOUR FUCKING COLORS! I KNOW JUST WHAT I SHOULD DO! YOU DID ALL OF THIS UNTO ME! now i must leave you blue...

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