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    dots Submission Name: glimpses of... what?dots
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    Author: --breathe--
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 3/12/8
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsglimpses of... what?dots
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    sometimes
    I think I'm clever

    ... most of the time, really

    but
    there are times when I don't

    and in this millisecond
    (perhaps shorter)
    I see that I am human
    and fully understand what that means

    I don't think this is one of those times, though




    Submitted on 2007-01-10 23:43:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this. It reminds me of myself...and a former friend of mine...and my stepfather...and just about everyone that I've ever known.

    I believe that sometimes, we all believe we're a little too clever. And then reality brings us back down to earth.

    But I think this is clever...and I like it very much...lol
    | Posted on 2007-01-12 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]
      As a thought (hence the title "I Think...) it was vulnerable and candid. The only sticking point would be the revelation about being "human." It was a bit vague. Especially when "thinking" pretty much sets humans apart from everything else in Nature.

    Perhaps if you told us what being human means to you, it would go deeper than the surface.

    The Gadfly
    | Posted on 2007-01-11 00:00:00 | by The Gadfly | [ Reply to This ]


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