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    dots Submission Name: Eighty-Six me.dots
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    Author: Imadjinn
    ASL Info:    17/M/Neverwhere
    Elite Ratio:    4.27 - 340/348/146
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 712
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 440



    Description:
       heh, just a little something. I put it to acoustics and it sounded alright, so I wonder how it will read. Comment me.


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    dotsEighty-Six me.dots
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    I guess you want, something else. Eighty-Six me. I guess you need, something else. Eighty-Six me. but everything I could say, you, oh oh oh, you're gonna wish away. but you don't need me, no not need. Eighty-Six me. but you don't want me, no, not me. Eighty-Six me. gentle look, you're so far gone, you, oh oh oh, have me widthdrawn. so, oh oh oh oh oh oh, Eighty-Six me. so, oh oh oh, oh oh oh, Eighty-Six me.




    Submitted on 2007-01-11 01:11:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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