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    Author: vencix
    ASL Info:    17/m/mi
    Elite Ratio:    1.54 - 16/82/58
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
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    water its moves with nature it flows with the land. its wite rapids flowing over the stones. fish swimeing up river to nest and to give life. bears clawing at the fish to feed there young. water suports the world and i think it is what will always be the way of life.




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      Ven
    You did a good job with this one in describing just how important water is to our life
    There would be no life at all on this Earth if it wasnt for the Beautiful gift of Water God has given us
    I hope you are feeling much better
    I havent spoken to you in a while
    My Mom is doing Great
    Its great to be back on the East Coast with her
    You take care of yourself My Friend
    Please keep in touch
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2007-01-19 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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