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Author: SkinnyWhiteBoy
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familys a bitch constantly putting me down i never know what im going to do set them off thay say that they understand but they dont fuck im confused never know what to say never know what to do fuck this sucks

Submitted on 2007-01-11 10:06:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I'm from a pretty screwed up family. just try to take it one day at a time and pretty soon you'll be out of their.
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