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    dots Submission Name: Stupid Test 2dots
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    Author: Webmaster
    ASL Info:    21
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 507/151/33
    Words: 13
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Angry
    Total Views: 1148
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 196



    Description:
       ":""$(@(*#*PIO moo


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsStupid Test 2dots
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    Testing or something.

    Or other.

    Blah';';';":":":>?<>?><OPUI
    *Y*#$Y(@*#(%*@)!@$)!_2







    Submitted on 2007-01-11 11:56:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Oh this one is much better than "Stupid Test"!


    The way you've separated it into stanzas is just...it reaches out to my heart! It digs so much deeper!

    You've given the piece some VOICE-it SPEAKS to me!

    I can hear the dramatic pauses!

    this is almost Shakespearean!


    Wow.

    Just wow.


    +Moz+
    | Posted on 2008-03-18 00:00:00 | by GoKart Mozart | [ Reply to This ]
      Can't help with the testing, but I like the new colorful touches and appreciate the new speed for the website. It was kind of hanging up on me but not lately. Good work.
    | Posted on 2007-01-11 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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