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Comfort


Author: Lynda
ASL Info:    26/F
Elite Ratio:    2.89 - 40 /45 /29
Words: 76
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Comfort



So tired at night
Feeling frail and beaten by the day
I slide under the plush down comforter
hoping that it once again lives up to its name

It dries my tears when I cry
It warms my soul when I'm cold
It surrounds me when I'm frightened
It comforts me

It's heard my most private confessions
It doesn't criticize or judge
It protects me until the morning arrives
It always comforts me




Submitted on 2007-01-11 13:16:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I, too, love to snuggle under a comforter and totally related to this write. Good read, Sharon :-)
| Posted on 2007-01-12 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
  i like it. tis really good. i like how you wrote it like you were talking about a comforter. if you read tell me teddy bear on my page its like that but different. its about a teddy bear that is lost and how it was always with me to keep me calm. good write. great read. keep posting...

tina
| Posted on 2007-01-11 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]


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