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    dots Submission Name: Comfort In Wordsdots
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    Author: Silenced poet
    ASL Info:    21/male/oregon
    Elite Ratio:    2.54 - 52/41/21
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    Description:
       Late night internal combustion.


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    I sit here with a pen,
    and a pad in my hand.
    Thoughts spinning so fast,
    it seems hard to stand.
    Visions of past,
    flashbacks of future.
    Love solomely lost,
    sex still craving consistance.
    Living a dream,
    and still facing a lie.
    Ignoring the heartache,
    supressing the cries.
    Subconsiously tormented,
    though conciously free.
    I'm breeding the falseness,
    by living at ease.
    There's no goal too high,
    no let down too low.
    And since I've lived their extremes,
    the euphorias known.
    I have been to the depths,
    seen the light at the peak.
    So i camp in the middle,
    for niether i reach.
    Since my mind holds no refuge,
    and life never could.
    I sit with paper and pad,
    and find my comfort in words.




    Submitted on 2007-01-12 03:36:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow i love it. it speaks with so much more than words.

    ''Im breeding the Falseness"

    Ignoring the heartache,

    Since my mind holds no refuge,

    I sit with paper and pad,
    and find my comfort in words.


    ~my heart burns for this beautiful hateful half truth.~
    | Posted on 2007-01-26 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]


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