A Straight Fu**k by TwistedMinded

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Submission Name: A Straight Fu**k dots

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Author:	TwistedMinded
ASL Info:	23/m/San Diego
Elite Ratio:	1.74 - 82/109/32
Words:	164

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	1072
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	1033

Description:
Love, Sex

A Straight Fu**k dots

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Sex I love it,
Who doesn’t.
Fucking thru the night,
Is a beautiful thing.
She had one hand gripping
The back of my neck,
Screaming my name, another scraping my
back
It felt like she was getting off all the anger
her husband had gave her,
But I was cool with that,
I was kissing her neck,
Cold ice dripping of her chest,
She said stop but I couldn’t,
She wouldn’t let go,
Our body’s hit the wall, hard
It was war,
Between two people,

Sex I love sex
Who doesn’t.
I can't stay faithful,
I love pussy
Especially when it doesn't belong to me,
She came over one day,
Pink, black launduray,
Ripped up panty hoes,
what more can I say
I swear I busted 5 nutts that day,

I woke up and she was gone,
what more can i ask for,
She knows the rules,
She knows what to do,
I love shit like that

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||| Comments |||
  WOW!
That turned me on a lil...
[[lol]]
Great write...
I love you poetry...
<33,

Lizzz
| Posted on 2007-05-06 00:00:00 | by Liz_Renee | [ Reply to This ]
  Okay! This poem, kinda of scared me for a little bit! But HEY!!! If that’s what you like! Then it’s what you like!!!
| Posted on 2007-05-03 00:00:00 | by Granger | [ Reply to This ]
  omg....i am scared for life thx alot....T_T
| Posted on 2007-03-12 00:00:00 | by darkmoonchild | [ Reply to This ]
  LOL! wow that's funny..
| Posted on 2007-03-02 00:00:00 | by Ani | [ Reply to This ]
  think that you got enough comments off of this one? yea, I have to agree... I don't think that any girl will wanna have sex with you after this unless you're jus too sexy to care...
love ya
lizzie
| Posted on 2007-02-28 00:00:00 | by angeldust | [ Reply to This ]
  I'll have to agree with one of the people who left u comment...i too have only had sex with one person, but if u knew me, u'd know that i absolutely LOVE it haha...
so I have to say that i find this hilarious and just a little bit sad (i dont mean to sound condescending however)

my final thought: i like it. haha it's honest. and i love honesty...

| Posted on 2007-02-27 00:00:00 | by Jessibel | [ Reply to This ]
  this was fun, but i doubt any girl's gonna want to date u after reading that :P
unless your so beautiful she won't care.

| Posted on 2007-02-13 00:00:00 | by XmaryjaneX | [ Reply to This ]
  SEX IS AWESOME!!!!!
| Posted on 2007-02-06 00:00:00 | by crazyinsane | [ Reply to This ]
  Maybe I can be that girl one day :P lol
| Posted on 2007-01-23 00:00:00 | by black- tears | [ Reply to This ]
  it would be funny if you got AIDS
| Posted on 2007-01-17 00:00:00 | by Master Bates | [ Reply to This ]
  I've never had a one night stand...
I've only had sex with one guy...
And I love sex too. lol
I like this. Welcome to the fav list babe
| Posted on 2007-01-15 00:00:00 | by BrokenAngelKat | [ Reply to This ]
  this was funny.and sad at the same time.so youre sleeping wth this women whos married and you see nothing wrong with it. how would you feel if someone was screwing your wife,how would you feel about that?i really want to know.
| Posted on 2007-01-13 00:00:00 | by vlarrimore | [ Reply to This ]
  This was very fun to read. And may i say, you have a *ckin way with words!

Cool write :D
| Posted on 2007-01-13 00:00:00 | by shatila | [ Reply to This ]
  Sex is fun :)
| Posted on 2007-01-13 00:00:00 | by kathleenbrennan | [ Reply to This ]

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