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    dots Submission Name: Should of never let u godots
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    Author: theman
    ASL Info:    21/m/mn
    Elite Ratio:    3.52 - 496/478/149
    Words: 238
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 614
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1424



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    dotsShould of never let u godots
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    You were like my homie
    My shortie
    You showed me so many things
    When i was with you, I didnt any bling
    You were that 6 karat diamond ring.

    we kick it for awhile
    you drove me so wild
    I would of walk 100 miles,
    just to see you sexy smile.

    Aint got no reputaion
    educated
    converstaion,was so easy, belive me,
    with a voice of a lullabye
    ingraved in my head for internity
    like a good song, with a love remedy.

    It was always more than sexual
    you already know
    so let me drop the flow
    with this girl, with a body of a goddess

    It's ooo so incredible
    It's unbeliveable
    How you knock me off my feet
    when I was with you
    you made me feel so complete
    that no one competes.

    Never ask,
    If you would like if i talked about your soft skin,
    or would like if it I talked about the way you wear your hair,
    would you like it if I talked about the you get your manicure.
    I'm the kind of guy
    that will show up at your door with
    roses and a teddybear.

    people say I don't know what i was feeling for you
    I might not know what love is,
    I might just be a fool and try to play it cool,
    but i knew what I was feeling
    when it came to you




    Submitted on 2007-01-13 20:09:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ha, i love it! good job... 5 for you! keep it up!!

    Lacee<3
    | Posted on 2007-03-10 00:00:00 | by SuicidalDrug | [ Reply to This ]


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