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    dots Submission Name: to me..dots
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    Author: Kimmy
    ASL Info:    18/f/Ar
    Elite Ratio:    3.11 - 18/32/20
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       short little poem i did a while back ago


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    dotsto me..dots
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    To me,
    it doesnt matter how long we've been apart
    i'd do anything to catch up,
    to know everything i didnt and should've
    i'll try my damndest to be with you
    i'll learn every mistake i made
    so i wouldnt do it again
    because to me,
    im nothing with out you....







    Submitted on 2007-01-13 23:43:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      "To me,
    it doesnt matter how long we've been apart
    i'd do anything to catch up"

    Beautiful...breathtaking...I love these lines, because I know EXACTLY what you mean.

    "i'll learn every mistake i made
    so i wouldnt do it again"

    I don't think you ever learn all of the mistakes, but if you try hard enough, maybe you can make them better...

    But i really like this piece, it's just beautiful...
    | Posted on 2007-01-14 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]


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