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    dots Submission Name: Mascaras Runningdots

    Author: Kimmy
    ASL Info:    18/f/Ar
    Elite Ratio:    3.11 - 18/32/20
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsMascaras Runningdots

    Mascara Running
    Eyelashes moist,
    Eyes so red,
    From all the tears shed
    If you want to help me,
    Come back to me,
    Dont let your self be a distant memory...
    Dont be selfendulged,
    Dont crimanate yourself any longer
    Dont cover the rain with just protection,
    Dont let me be Sick,
    Help me understand that what you did was right
    tell me everythings going to be okay...
    because until then,
    The Mascaras still running

    Submitted on 2007-01-13 23:50:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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