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    dots Submission Name: Changesdots

    Author: Kimmy
    ASL Info:    18/f/Ar
    Elite Ratio:    3.11 - 18/32/20
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Dont pretend you never lied to me,
    Dont act like you never did anything wrong
    Because you know you would be lieing to yourself,
    Dont try to ignore it, and think you never did
    Dont try to make yourself feel better if you dont think about it,
    You cant hurt me anymore, you've hurt me more than anyone that i know....
    You'll never make me feel the way i did before,
    Times change, and what you did changes everything!

    Submitted on 2007-01-13 23:51:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is really deep and emotional. It shows a lot of inner feeling. Its real and raw. This is really good. Writing that truely expresses what you are feeling inside is always the best kind.

    Keep up the great writing.

    | Posted on 2007-01-14 00:00:00 | by Kamerin Brown | [ Reply to This ]

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