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oh why?


Author: darkwiccan14
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sigh...guys need to get a life and stop bickering over me...i'm not even that pretty...:( lol o well


oh why?



Stuck in the middle,
of two guys,
Dunno' who to pick,
or where to hide.

In my heart,
I try and try,
To pick who to stay,
and who to tell goodbye.

It's a difficult story,
these guys,
and i ask this question,
oh why?




Submitted on 2007-01-14 12:58:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  seems like you are in quite a dilemma lol. the poem could have been a little more indepth but it gets your point across. nicely done
| Posted on 2007-01-14 00:00:00 | by JAcksonJr | [ Reply to This ]
  Nice poem; lucky you! Us guys are just gonna "bash each other around" over you lovely ladies!
| Posted on 2007-01-14 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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