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Why do I hurt those I love?

Author: DrewDilla
ASL Info:    25/M/Chicago
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I just always think I hurt my family n friends more then enemies.

Why do I hurt those I love?

Why do I hurt those I love?
This is a question for God.
So I look really far above.
So your, head you nod.
Cause, you hear them two.
Ya God’s not one but many.
And, off the building they flew.
They full of Answers for any
Question you may have about life.
Like Why I get mad very easy.
Got to fix this, before I got a wife.
So she’ll chill, clean and, please me.
But she won’t do all the house work.
Well share n split all the chores.
Together we can be one big dork.
Sometime I’ll treat you like some hoers.
And, I don’t know why I can’t stop it
I open my mouth and bad stuff comes out.
Wish I could close it like a locket.
But, why can’t I get on a clear route,
And, be nice to family and friends.
Instead I act like I hate them very much
And, to the breaks I start to amends.
Cause, I have gods’ holy touch.

Submitted on 2007-01-14 13:21:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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