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Confused 2


Author: TeeTee
ASL Info:    15/f/georgia
Elite Ratio:    1.31 - 30 /32 /22
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Confused 2



Baby please dont take this the wrong way,
But there is a couple of things that I would like to say,

I know I promised you that someday I would be your wife,
Its funny tho, cause I see me in another life,
Aint trying to say that you are the problem
Because I dont think that there is any problem.

Its just,....The way Im feeling,
Like theres no one listening.
I know that this a good way to hear the ending.
Thats why I keep to myself.
I see us in the future but at times I dont know how.

I know I promised you someday that I would be your wife,
Its funny tho, cause I see me in another life,
It seems as tho, you have taken away my pride.
There is different things that I see when I look in your eyes.
I know that you are the one for me,
Or is that what I want to believe?

Confused,
Confused,
Confused,
Dont know what to do?
Lord please give me a sign.

I know I promised you someday that I would be your wife,
Its funny tho cause I see me in another life,..........




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