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    dots Submission Name: Regretdots
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    Author: Kamerin Brown
    ASL Info:    17/M/WA
    Elite Ratio:    5.51 - 64/34/22
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsRegretdots
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    A breath,
    Strikes your heart with a forceful fist,
    Collision,
    More damage done than intended,
    It starts,
    A cycle that you cannot control,
    Regret,
    The choices, decisions, mistakes,
    You try,
    But there is no repair,
    A life,
    Once whole, now shattered,
    A soul,
    Once loved, now lost,
    A mind,
    Once bright, now faded,
    A breath,
    It doesn't last.




    Submitted on 2007-01-14 16:35:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Is it the regret that doesnt last or the hope given in each new breath?

    regret affects everyone because it is an ever current reminder that things could be better today but arent because of yesterday, and worse because of your specific actions. not just because of chance but because of something that was or wasnt done on your part.

    one of my most recent poems conveys this message thought not as straight forward as yours

    a question: what can we do in the wake of regret?

    my answer: nothing. Except move on
    | Posted on 2007-01-15 00:00:00 | by jcpdandalice | [ Reply to This ]



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