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    dots Submission Name: Imperfectdots
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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 737
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 692



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    dotsImperfectdots
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    Imperfect as can be
    I don稚 know what you see in me
    I知 different
    I知 not petite
    Not the pretty girl down the street
    Everything that you see
    I see different
    Don稚 make me sit here and lie
    I have to tell the truth
    I知 not the prettiest
    The nicest
    The kindest person you can see
    I知 as imperfect as can be
    I知 not the typical girl
    To walk down the street and wave
    I知 conservative, secretive
    You値l never know me
    You値l have to break the shell
    And show me I can trust you
    Before I値l let you in
    And let you take over
    Of my imperfect world




    Submitted on 2007-01-14 17:48:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i think...I wanna stalk you...creepy eh?
    | Posted on 2007-01-19 00:00:00 | by 2xhatedxsoulx2 | [ Reply to This ]
      It's a really great poem and I can totally relate.
    But I think that the imperfections in life are what make it beautiful, you should be happy your special and different and that people embrace you for it. Be happy being you :) Because we're all beautiful.

    - Kathleen
    | Posted on 2007-01-14 00:00:00 | by kathleenbrennan | [ Reply to This ]


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