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    dots Submission Name: Free To Be Medots
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    Author: Deadly Sauce
    ASL Info:    18--lady--NY
    Elite Ratio:    2.69 - 59/77/31
    Words: 135
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 162
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 958



    Description:
       An oldie, around 1 year old. Not really looking to edit.


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    dotsFree To Be Medots
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    Strike a pose
    The whole world’s watching
    Be yourself
    Cuz they’re all judging
    Change
    Transform
    To fit the mold
    Minor imperfections can be
    Repaired
    But my mold
    Seems to be
    Missing pieces.
    In their places,
    Unruly desires manifest,
    Grow,
    And fester.
    I don’t mind their prescence
    But it’s the others,
    Those who see my skin
    But not the fillings,
    Who need to understand
    That I want to be me
    But there are parts of me
    That don’t fit
    With everyone else
    If I knew I could be
    Accepted
    If I did all I pleased
    This would all go away
    But through time,
    There has developed
    A norm
    Based on majority
    And our laws have been founded
    Upon these very things
    So I am not truly
    Free
    To be
    What I want to be




    Submitted on 2007-01-14 18:15:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      nothing pleases the people. good write yo. just be.
    | Posted on 2007-01-16 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this n i dnt think u need to edit it. its something ive felt for a while that even no i no who i am i feel like theres things missing but ive come to the fact that those missing pieces make me the way i am n i like it better that way.
    | Posted on 2007-01-14 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]



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