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My Thoughts Are Only My Thoughts


Author: Kimmy
ASL Info:    18/f/Ar
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what if thinking got you farther?


My Thoughts Are Only My Thoughts



My Thoughts are only my thoughts
they never seem to be actions
so many things i want to do and say
and yet, i always seem to back away.
why?
beause every action has a reaction
and sometimes the reactions arent so good

My thoughts are only my thoughts
they never seem to be actions
why?
because im afriad of rejection, and acception
im fearful of what i could loose and gain
im afriad of the world..

"So plunge on through" they say
"theres nothing to fear",
theres everything to fear..
everything can't go your way,
so why does everyone expect it to?




Submitted on 2007-01-14 22:17:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  in this crazy world
the only reactions we'll get
is if we interact with what we've got

to hide and to seclude
gives you nothing
fight on and
keep trying.
| Posted on 2007-01-15 00:00:00 | by Mieko | [ Reply to This ]
  This was cool, I think a lot of people have this fear and this concern, that they aren't being everything they can because their not saying what's on their mind. I used to be that way, but then I was just like, really, what good is this doing? So I just started talking...most of the time:)

These were my favorite lines,

"so many things i want to do and say
and yet, i always seem to back away."

They were just so...honest. I don't know,

Great write,
Sam
| Posted on 2007-01-14 00:00:00 | by Falling Rain | [ Reply to This ]


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