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    dots Submission Name: My Thoughts Are Only My Thoughtsdots
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    Author: Kimmy
    ASL Info:    18/f/Ar
    Elite Ratio:    3.11 - 18/32/20
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       what if thinking got you farther?


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    My Thoughts are only my thoughts
    they never seem to be actions
    so many things i want to do and say
    and yet, i always seem to back away.
    why?
    beause every action has a reaction
    and sometimes the reactions arent so good

    My thoughts are only my thoughts
    they never seem to be actions
    why?
    because im afriad of rejection, and acception
    im fearful of what i could loose and gain
    im afriad of the world..

    "So plunge on through" they say
    "theres nothing to fear",
    theres everything to fear..
    everything can't go your way,
    so why does everyone expect it to?




    Submitted on 2007-01-14 22:17:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      in this crazy world
    the only reactions we'll get
    is if we interact with what we've got

    to hide and to seclude
    gives you nothing
    fight on and
    keep trying.
    | Posted on 2007-01-15 00:00:00 | by Mieko | [ Reply to This ]
      This was cool, I think a lot of people have this fear and this concern, that they aren't being everything they can because their not saying what's on their mind. I used to be that way, but then I was just like, really, what good is this doing? So I just started talking...most of the time:)

    These were my favorite lines,

    "so many things i want to do and say
    and yet, i always seem to back away."

    They were just so...honest. I don't know,

    Great write,
    Sam
    | Posted on 2007-01-14 00:00:00 | by Falling Rain | [ Reply to This ]


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