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Want to Break Free


Author: deathbroken
Elite Ratio:    2.54 - 57 /142 /38
Words: 186
Class/Type: Lyrics /I hate you
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I know its used alot already, but i couldnt resist.


Want to Break Free




Give me a break
Get out of my head
Stop tormenting me
I had enough

I want to break free
Get away from you
From the world

I want to hide in my room
Blasting the radio up loud
So that I cant hear my own screams
And my own sobs

Let go of me
Get away from me
Stop controlling my life
Let me be free

I want to break free
Get away from you
From the world

I want to hide in my room
Blasting the radio up loud
So that I cant hear my own screams
And my own sobs

You didn't care
You never did
Words of love and lies just appear from you lips
Leading me into illusions and despair

It was a mistake listening to you
You don’t know what I’ve been through
You fake and pretend
To be someone your not

Now I see the real you underneath
Disgusted and hurt
That’s what I really feel.

I want to break free
Get away from you
From the world




Submitted on 2007-01-15 08:44:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Great stuff from you. The form, structure and word usage is superb.

Very well done.

Frank.
| Posted on 2007-01-15 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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