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    dots Submission Name: A lesson learneddots
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    Author: SpartanSteve
    ASL Info:    20/m/texas
    Elite Ratio:    3.85 - 41/54/45
    Words: 13
    Class/Type: Haiku/Comedy
    Total Views: 163
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 95



    Description:
       A lil haiku I wrote while laying around, thinking about old times.


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    dotsA lesson learneddots
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    Once upon a time,
    We drove across people's lawns.
    Sprinkler heads pop tires.




    Submitted on 2007-01-15 17:21:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      AHHHH!! that was a good one. I didn't expect something so short, but what can i say it is funny.

    Thanks for the short but BEAUTIFUL read! LOL

    PEACE

    ~MaGgIe
    | Posted on 2007-08-07 00:00:00 | by Magger32 | [ Reply to This ]
      oh the joys of reckless abandon.

    It's hilarious.
    How we document our lives.
    So few words to use.

    | Posted on 2007-01-29 00:00:00 | by googie | [ Reply to This ]
      Steve:

    Nice job man. I like the fact that it is about a normal teen fun night out with the guys sort of story, and not some life lesson about a grasshopper. And yet it paints a clear picture and tells a story. Well done.


    | Posted on 2007-01-26 00:00:00 | by Mykquillion | [ Reply to This ]
      hahahah! amazing. i expected it to be all serious and life-contemplating cuz its a haiku. awesome job.

    Love and peace.
    | Posted on 2007-01-15 00:00:00 | by thehappyfaery | [ Reply to This ]



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